Editing: What Did I Learn?

Way back in March, I wrote a post about my plans to line edit The Trickster’s Lover, my paranormal romance/urban fantasy novel with Norse gods. (Check out a preview here.)

Wow, did I ever have no freaking clue what I was getting myself into.

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Actual footage of Samantha MacLeod

Since that time I’ve gotten a cover, one of my erotic short stories has been accepted for publication, I’ve re-written the novel’s blurb about 500 times… And I’ve still been editing.

And editing.

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Every page looks like this. Every. Page.

My novel is over 100,000 words, which is almost 400 pages of double-spaced, Times New Roman manuscript. And I seriously underestimated the amount of time it would take take for me to comb through 400 pages (and also, you know, keep my day job).

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Actual footage of Samantha MacLeod

So what exactly did I learn during this long, painful process?

Well, to start with: Typos.

So. Many. Typos.

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This is especially embarrassing, because I TEACH COLLEGE COMPOSITION!

And I found inconsistencies – a window that was open during a February scene, or a meal that started as ribs and ended up as smoked fish. A student who had two different names in the space of three paragraphs.

I also read the fabulous and very helpful book Manuscript Makeover by Elizabeth Lyon, and I incorporated much of her advice. (Yes, I’m the type of person who believes you can read a book to find the answer to any and every question in life.)

I used riff writing to expand on my character’s emotional reactions. I changed my vocabulary to be more reflective of my neurotic, overeducated protagonist, Caroline Capello.

Basically, I spent the last three months obsessing over every word. And I mean Every. Word.

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This was me. But without the slinky.

And then, one sunny morning at a cute, local coffee shop, I finished editing the printed manuscript. A few days later, I finished making those changes to the electronic version.

Then the hard part: Calling it done.

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DONE!

Sending the manuscript off to my wonderful and very patient graphic designer, Kit Foster, means It. Is. Done.

I can’t keep obsessing over that one scene. I can’t wake up at 3 in the morning and change two lines of dialog.

It’s time for me to just…

let it go

So what am I going to obsess about now?

Oh yeah, the sequel…

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